In the process of adjusting his exemplar Copland himself made a few mistakes, e.g., by leaving out words, thus marring the meter, while in other cases his modernization of the spelling sometimes led to a faulty rhyme (for examples, see the notes). But on the whole Copland's interventions are limited and do not lead to any basic changes in the text.
Wynkyn de Worde
He serued the kyng her fader dere
Fully the tyme of seuen yere
For he was marshall of his hall
And set the lordes bothe grete and small William Copland
He serued the kyng her father dere
Fully the tyme of seuen yere
For he was marshall of his hall
And set the lords both great and small
It was a squier of England borne,Considering that the Percy manuscript presents what is on the whole a heavily condensed version of the story, it seems probable that a longer, more complete text once existed but was not known to either Wynkyn de Worde or Copland.
He wrought a forffett against the crowne,
Against the crowne and against the fee;
In England tarry no longer durst hee,
For hee was vexed beyond the see
Into the kings land of Hungarye. (lines 1-6)
She would have taken hym golde and fe,What exactly is meant by these lines is not clear. Most likely the author wants to express that if she had known where the squire was and what his intentions were, she would have taken gold and a group of armed men, and gone out to meet him somewhere, away from the castle.
Strength of men and royalté. (lines 527-28)
- the lady tells the squire where to go and what to doIn fact, the story moves away from the court only twice: on the two occasions that the squire leaves to go overseas. But although the first time he returns the same night, and the second after seven years, the difference in time span does not show in a difference in the number of lines used, fewer than twenty in either case. The court remains firmly the center of our attention, and with it the father-daughter relationship.
- the fight between the squire and the steward takes place
- the king puts the squire in prison (and later releases him)
- the lady embalms the wrong body
- the king tries to comfort his daughter with a long list of possible diversions
- the squire reports back to the king
- the wedding and coronation take place.
- the unhappy squire withdraws to the orchardIn this highly abbreviated version the role of the lady is even more prominent than in the longer one: the squire never leaves the court, and his active part is restricted to his lament in the orchard and his fight with the king's men. At the end the dialogue is entirely focused on the lady and her father, and it is her marriage that is described, without any reference to the squire, let alone to a possible coronation.18
- the lady overhears his complaint under her window and advises him
- the squire is attacked by twenty men stationed at the lady's room by her father (no reason is given), and in vain asks her to open her door
- the squire is arrested and a dead man is taken from the gallows, his face mutilated and the body placed before the lady's door
- the lady embalms (parts of) the body, thinking it is the squire
- her lament is overheard by her father, who asks for whom she is mourning
- the king offers all kinds of diversions but none are acceptable to his daughter
- finally the king reveals that the one she loves is kept in his prison
- when she asks why he did all this to her the king answers that he had hoped to marry her to a king
- the lady's wedding concludes the story.